Ines Johnson is here for her third (and last) day of her series on complication cards. Today, she shows you how to put together what you did in the exercises in part 1 and part 2 to summarize the nut of your story or scene on a single index card.
Complication Cards, Part 3: The Scene
by Ines Johnson
You’ve discovered your character’s need
and potentially their want, which is
a false goal. You’ve learned about the four types of obstacles that can
obstruct your character on the way to achieving their goals and filling their
need. Now, to build a heart-pounding story where you send your character
through the toughest obstacle course you can imagine, you should map out a
blueprint for the course.
Four elements of a story
*Hero/heroine: Primary character looking to fill the void in their life
*Want: A false goal that the hero or heroine initially believes
is their path to wholeness
*Obstacle: One of the four obstacles opposing the hero or heroine
*Need: The true goal of the hero or heroine, the thing that
will satisfy their void
Examples of obstacle cards for
different kinds of complications
Antagonist as complication
In the Cinderella adaptation Ever
After, Danielle (heroine) works tirelessly to gain acceptance (want) from
her stepmother (antagonist) until she realizes her family of friends, including
the Prince, love her unconditionally (need).
Physical world as complication
In “The Little Mermaid” adaptation Splash,
Madison (heroine) leaves the sea to be with Allen (want), but when her legs get
wet and her fins come back (obstacle), she’s forced to tell Allen the truth of
her existence in the hope that he’ll spend forever with her under the sea
(need).
Inner or psychological problem as
complication
In the unconventional fairy tale Shrek,
Princess Fiona (heroine) hopes to be rescued by a knight in shining armor
(want) who will break her curse (obstacle) until she realizes that true love is
“color” blind (need).
Mystic force as complication
In The Frog Prince, Tiana
(heroine) dreams of opening a restaurant (want), but her dream takes a slight
detour when she’s turned into a frog (obstacle) along with Prince Naveen and
learns to seek and take help from others (need).
Exercise
Now it’s your turn. Fill out your own obstacle card for your story. If
you want to take it a step further, fill out a card for each scene!
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Ines Johnson writes romantic erotica,
paranormal romance, and fairytale-retelling romance novels. You can find her
Website at https://inesjohnson.wordpress.com/. Part one of her newest
romantic erotica book, The Loyal Steed, is at Amazon here. The complete
serial can be preordered here.
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